Write lyrics for the second verse of the song

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Here's a song my band is working on:

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Your task is to write the lyrics for the second verse. Right now I'm singing the first verse twice.

Try to match the vocals part, but not 100% precisely - it's even interesting when the first and the second verses don't have identical form.

Here are the lyrics:

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The song is about respecting and defending boundaries. The first verse is about my ex-employer who tried to push me as a freelancer and pay me less by the hour than I asked for (here at freelancer by the way :)

So the first verse is about money, but the second verse doesn't have to be. You can describe any situation when someone's pushing it and you're telling them to back off. Instead of "you say I charge too much" in the second chorus you could say "you say I want too much" so it makes sense if your lyrics aren't about money. You'll have to replace "low on cash" with something appropriate, too. Or, you can stick to the money subject and develop in some other way - then you can keep the lyrics of the second chorus unchanged.

Eventually I'll post the final result on my channel: [login to view URL]

This contest is not a one time thing: I'm looking for long term partners, so it's your chance to show off your skills, get more orders from me in the future, and get your work featured in videos like this one: [login to view URL]

Looking forward to your work!

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  • JenniferSagaya
    JenniferSagaya
    • acum 2 săptămâni

    You want to me to serve you
    No ! I cant bestow me to you
    Well you want to blend me a one
    Oh No ! I am a creative one

    I cant be a mule or so you want me to be
    I"ll be me and only me
    You say you aint afford me
    Oh thats better i want to be me

    Chorus 2
    One thing I owe you is a punch in the face
    We dont accept shit here.I aint taking no shit from you
    We dont accept shit here,so what you gonna do,
    what you gonna...You want to me to serve youis that you're asking for well yeah!
    Dont make me repeat no more
    So you know my terms,but if you insist
    Ill have you read them off my fist right at your face

    Be on your fence Oh yeah Be on your fence
    Dont drag me to yours to serve under you
    If you feel only you can offer
    Im sorry I have my desires left to buffer

    We dont accept shit here.I aint taking no shit from you
    We dont accept shit here,so what you gonna do,
    what you gonna...
    We dont accept shit here.I aint taking no shit from you
    We dont accept shit here,so what you gonna do,
    what you gonna...

    • acum 2 săptămâni
    1. michaelrybakvw
      Titular Concurs
      • acum 2 săptămâni

      Thanks Jennifer. Would you like to submit this as an entry? You've posted this as a comment to the contest.

      • acum 2 săptămâni
  • JenniferSagaya
    JenniferSagaya
    • acum 2 săptămâni

    You want to me to serve you
    No ! I cant bestow me to you
    Well you want to blend me a one
    Oh No ! I am a creative one

    I cant be a mule or so you want me to be
    I"ll be me and only me
    You say you aint afford me
    Oh thats better i want to be me

    Chorus 2
    One thing I owe you is a punch in the face
    is that you're asking for well yeah!
    Dont make me repeat no more
    So you know my terms,but if you insist
    Ill have you read them off my fist right at your face

    Be on your fence Oh yeah Be on your fence
    Dont drag me to yours to serve under you
    If you feel only you can offer
    Im sorry I have my desires left to buffer

    We dont accept shit here.I aint taking no shit from you
    We dont accept shit here,so what you gonna do,
    what you gonna...
    We dont accept shit here.I aint taking no shit from you
    We dont accept shit here,so what you gonna do,
    what you gonna...

    • acum 2 săptămâni
  • FAISAL59590
    FAISAL59590
    • acum 2 săptămâni

    please check out my entry #2

    • acum 2 săptămâni
  • FAISAL59590
    FAISAL59590
    • acum 2 săptămâni

    I have included some slangs and native words to make it or appealing. Also, the tone and theme of the song are unchanged. I rewrote the second part from scratch for better rhyming that will suit the rhythm and melody of the tune of the song. Any suggestions and corrections are very appreciated. I hope, you will like my work. I am looking to working with you for long terms.

    • acum 2 săptămâni
  • FAISAL59590
    FAISAL59590
    • acum 2 săptămâni

    sir, i am profession poet and song witer. working on your project.

    • acum 2 săptămâni

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