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" the last meeting chaired by [login to view URL], we discussed the TPMO progress for the ship management, he requested the followings;
ship management has no finance model as this Business unit is unprofitable unit; the best definition will be budget optimisation.
To include Plan maintenance optimisation.
To include BPO milestones in the TPMO.
To keep the milestone of the operating model(Gap Closure) with another Business unit.
Therefore I would like to request from [login to view URL] to send me the BPO Milestones, in addition, I am seeking your advice to liaise with the technical department to check what we can include as part of optimizations in our budget, and also determine the Gaps between us and another units to close them such as (IT software not fully utilized due to authorization, HR SAP Fiori for National Seafarers which in turn will disrupt HR-related for them as soon as BPO in place etc.) "
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Hi There! I have more than 8-year experience in this field. Would you please share more details about the project? I am really interested to work with you for long. Best Regards, Abhishek