Can you improve the title and make that the word stay in one third of the upper part of the page... there are 2 parts still of the text that need to go underneath.
I like that you have started to put some mixed colors in the background.
The purpurin effect; I don´t like it. It has to be more vivid colors.
The title letters are too big... there are many more sentences to come.
And the mix of letters fonts has to be more different, attractive and easy to read (like the doc I attached)