I'm looking for a writer to re-write just the dialog for my screenplay.

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I have completed writing a high concept coming of age screenplay. The screenplay has good structure and character development. But, has weak dialog. It has received great feedback from department head of the UCLA's screenwriters master program. And, the script has been query and requested by over a 100 producers.

Thank you for all who have responded to my offer. I will be choosing a candidate in 4-8 days. To get to know your skills better, I would like for you to send a sample re-write of pages 2 and 3 of the attached sample. This is not required for the position, but it would give me a better idea of your skills. Also, if your offer includes proofreading of the overall script let me know that too.

Very brief background and character description:

Mutiny In The Dugout
Cain is doomed to wander the earth, in the Land of Nod, somewhere East of Eden, protected by the Mark of Cain, which is thought to be a canine. The word Nod actually means “wandering” in Hebrew, so it’s a term more descriptive of Cain’s life than his actual wandering. This is a story about Cain coming home to become the prodigal son and their fight on the field of baseball for their father’s love.

(Cain) - After breaking Abe's collar bone and ruining his future baseball career, seeks comfort with Teri, ends up running off to Alaska (East of Eden). Plays semi-professional ball. But lives the life of a wanderer.

Abe (Abel) - while growing up, competes with Charlie for Gordon's love. After the injury he is forced to make peace with himself. Becomes a minister. Counsels troubled kids. Believes organized sports go way too far.

Gordon (god like figure) - Good old boy, He is either drinking or coaching baseball.

Rod

Thanks to all who tried to send me sample pages, but the site won't let me have direct contact with anybody. Pages can be sent to 'dts42g *at* gmail *dot* com' up until Sunday (3/2).

Thanks,
Rod

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Hi, I am new at freelancer.com and ready for work and I would appreciate a lot if you would give me this opportunity to approve it. I 'll do my best to finish the job as fast as possible Regards Steve

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I am a screenwriter from Australia who has worked on a multitude of projects and, in particular, reworking dialogue. I specialise in comedy, drama and science fiction, and with three of my own screenplays (2x spec, 1x Mai multe

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I am interested in working with you to complete a script to shoot . I have written some scripts in both theater and films. please feel free to contact me if you want to read the samples of my art works.

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lizacornejo

Hello! I would really love to help you on this. Why not try me out by send me a short scene with a dialogue that you want me to tweak. This will help you decide. Thanks! eLiza

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buzzwellpr

Hi Rod, I will edit the entire script along with the dialogue work. From what I can tell so far, there is a good frame that I can really build upon. Can you give me your email so I can send you what I've done with t Mai multe

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