Chicago Thesis

Am looking for writer to edit my thesis and follow my rule. RULE: 1, Please use the structure I have advised - breaking your thesis into chapters, with headings and sub-headings for each chapter if you can, to make it flow well. This is the structure: Introduction (essay submittted) -Introduction -Thesis statement -Literature Review (some of the main writers you will be quoting) -Methodology (in your case, teaching at WYC) -Road map for chapters Ch 1 – theoretical framework Ch 2 - arguments/artist reference Ch 3 – argument/artist reference/own work Conclusions -Revisit thesis statement and claim -Limitations of research/methodology -Further investigations for future (could be future research or teaching) If you follow the structure above, then you can see how to organise your materials. 2. The thesis is lacking visual images of your students' works and this is an important part of your thesis statement - to analyse their emotions through their art making. 3. Please follow chicago format - such as margins, page numbers, etc. Even your footnotes are not formattted properly (for eg, why are they indented). This website may be useful. [login to view URL] 4. Language style - can you watch this a bit. When you are quoting other writers, the language is quite different from when you are writing in your own words. So please make sure when you are quoting, it may be better to use quotes (ie "...") 5. Please keep at 6000 words. Do this quickly. **PLEASE DO NOT EXCEPT THIS THESIS IF YOU CANNOT COMPLETE BEFORE DEADLINE: 6TH APRIL 2014.